A poem can be tricky if you don't
know how to write one, and there are different poems one can learn in
school. I enjoy writing poems and I always believed that my writing was good.
As I was growing up, the few times my poems were evaluated, I was told they
lacked the meter. I never understood
what that meant, but that is because I neglected to find out what the meter had to
do with poetry. I would write what I felt was understandable to me or what
sounded good.
The following poems are various
types Hayden (my son) experimented with during his English literature class. I am thrilled
that my son studied writing poetry and that Hayden understands
the process well enough to explain them to me. Though he was younger when he
wrote these, he could still understand each method of poetry that he read in
each of the examples below. Like my grandfather, Hayden studied poetry so he
could write a poem properly.
My Grandfather Armando Figueroa
would write poems during his off-time from his job as a court interpreter. He
understood the many methods to make a poem complete and his notes to his family
were beautiful. He was very intelligent and would read books on writing poetry.
I believe that between Grandpa Figueroa, my son Hayden, and I writing is in our
hearts and soul.
Young Derek Jayden
Epic master of his craft
Ties his shoelaces
Mindset on the finish line
Eight Hundred meters begins
Lyric
There once was a big round lady
Who worked in the Navy?
Her weight made her not want to date
Because of the weight, she had to wait
And over that time of waiting,
She had lost some weight
Then she had several dates
And of those dates,
One determined her fate
Limerick
There was a dog named Susie
She was feeling a little woozy
She felt so sick
Because she ate a stick
Poor little old Susie
Free Verse
Ties his shoelaces
Mindset on the finish line
Eight Hundred meters begins
Lyric
There once was a big round lady
Who worked in the Navy?
Her weight made her not want to date
Because of the weight, she had to wait
And over that time of waiting,
She had lost some weight
Then she had several dates
And of those dates,
One determined her fate
Limerick
There was a dog named Susie
She was feeling a little woozy
She felt so sick
Because she ate a stick
Poor little old Susie
Free Verse
The rain comes
On the silent streets
It hits the ground
All over the city
On top of rooftops
The rain continues to splash.
Sonnet
Out of the Earth, a bud of life
Deep purple, small and delicate
Free from captivity and strife
Young buds rising intimate
Sweet morning breeze, it smells so great
So red the rose, so red and bright
A figment of beauty to grow and separate
Hypnotizing like a flash of light.
To grow for a while, only to go away
For always in my heart,
To think they won’t stay
They fall apart.
The Death of the Rose
Brings the birth of the bellows.
On the silent streets
It hits the ground
All over the city
On top of rooftops
The rain continues to splash.
Sonnet
Out of the Earth, a bud of life
Deep purple, small and delicate
Free from captivity and strife
Young buds rising intimate
Sweet morning breeze, it smells so great
So red the rose, so red and bright
A figment of beauty to grow and separate
Hypnotizing like a flash of light.
To grow for a while, only to go away
For always in my heart,
To think they won’t stay
They fall apart.
The Death of the Rose
Brings the birth of the bellows.
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